Paulie Tuazon said...
Tim,
I enjoyed reading your paper. I liked the quotes you chose and you supported it very well. Your quotes had brought an insight to how the industrial food system really works. Although, you did answer all of the assigned questions for this assignment, I feel like it was not clear to me what your main argument was or your point of view. If you embedded this into the paper, than I aplogize!
March 30, 2007 8:24 AM
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Paulie,
Nice job mixing the positive feedback with a suggestion for improvement.
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